kara-the-hedgehog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic's Adventure Trailer]

The plot's too familiar

Not bad with the sprites. You deffinately know how to use them well. Your story idea isn't bad, but it's too much related to the Sonic Battle game. I mean, sure, it's your own ideas for the fact this robot is going to be the "ultimate weapon," and that it doesn't want to live for its purpose as much, but that's sorta how Sonic Battle goes: a 5,000 year old robot, known as "Emerl" from Sonic & pals, whom was originally built to destroy by obtaining all the Chaos Emeralds (which Emerl craves for) decides to live differently. Like I said, good story idea, just too much close to Sonic Battle (at least, what this trailer has taught us).

gunnchief responds:

Well, the story is actually this:

After Emerl's defeat, two unknown professor's make a clone of Emerl and fix the clone (Also stopping the power overload problem) They also built a lot of Emerl's Move Database inside the robot.They name the clone Phi-Zero and put it through testing to see how powerful It was, however when they put Psi-Zero on a mission to collect the emeralds, something triggered inside him and he betrayed the two professors and went to achieve full power of the emeralds.This plot takes place after Sonic Battle of course, but you're right, the trailer doesn't show what I said strongly enough, however I'll start on the first episode soon.

You shouldn't rate your reviews a 1 just because you haven't asked me the plot. I hate reviewers with dumb dramatic scores

[Ball with Tail]

More like a storyboard

I can understand that you want to show some ideas you have, but really, this animation still looks like it's under development. Not to mention the whole thing's about 10 seconds long.

Nigel-of-the-Drakes responds:

It's actually a pencil test. That's the entire project. I just put it on here to see if it could pass judgment. And it did. So my mission was accomplished.